I see what you're saying, and I truly appreciate the suggestion. But I don't speak that way, I'm not Commander Data. I try to write, particularly in my OLJ, the way I speak. For me to change that for the sake of LJ Idol would, in my personal opinion, be pretentious. If I am to do well in LJ Idol, it will be as me, not in a styple not my own. Again, I'm not trying to downplay your advice, I do appreciate it, but this is why I'm doing what I'm doing.