http://shazza59.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] shazza59.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dogriver 2008-06-13 04:42 pm (UTC)

I! Love! this! The ending though, was a tad lame my dear. smile. What should have happened was that the gluttonous swi... I mean the big bad executive should have come in, tossed the secretary over his shoulder, hauled her out into the hallway and shot her down a flight of stairs. Then he could have come back and rescued his little coke fridge from the wicked witch of Winnipeg, ( love that illiteration). :) LOL! LOL, good story Bruce, I am grinning!
But it needs a sequel. What else can the little coke fridge do? Write another??? Please??

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